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Fri, Jan. 9th, 2009, 01:52 am
timewaster89: I Think I May Have Created a Mary Sue

Title: Accidentally in Love
Fandom: Heroes
Link: http://www.quizilla.com/user/animefan15/stuff/ (Just ignore my other stories, because they're either completed or on a permanent hiatus, except Quest for Revenge)
Reason: I wrote this when I first discovered the show and fell in love with Mohinder and lusted after Sylar.  I used to think that my character was the kickass female lead that you don't often see on the show, but now I think she's a bitchy Lana Lang with super powers.  My readers insist that she's not a Mary Sue, but quizilla is full of Suethors, so I'm not sure if they're right.  I even created this huge plot hole about the fact that she was around Sylar for so long and he didn't kill her.  I tried to fix the plot hole by saying that she's been friends with him for three years and he overheard him saying that he was always special to her, ability or no ability, and he always will be.  Now I realized that I just dug deeper and deeper into the plot hole under the delusion that it actually made sense.  I originally posted this in oc_analyses, but now I think this is a far more suiting group for it.  I really hope I can improve this piece of shit.